Writing revise poetry

Author note: The point of me posting this is to predict on what will happen next in the poem by writing my own piece following the poem "Hope" By Sri Chinmoy

By: Sri Chinmoy

Hope abides; therefore I abide.
Countless frustrations have not cowed me.
I am still alive, vibrant with life.
The black cloud will disappear,
The morning sun will appear once again
In all its supernal glory.......
Untill I fail I must not give.
The life of glory givin to me
With endless nights and cowardly emotions
I must not fail but only hope
With love and laughter it give me strength
leave me to look back, and wait
Until the day I say goodbye.

Have you ever been told that you can't do something?That your dream was stupid and you would never make it."Hope" by Sri Chinmoy tells the reader to not give up.Poetry can go on forever so that's why I predicted on what would happen next in "hope" Writtten by Sri Chinmoy. I said " I must not fail but only hope", That quote is one of the main Quotes I wrote because, it shows that it's important to always try and never give up! Also that's the purpose of this poetry to hope never fail.That's how I was able to predict on what would happen next.Poems show emotions just like this one and if you can analysis them you will greatly make a connection to them.